It was pretty dry.
It had the chance of being funny, but then it really wasn't. It wasn't bad for your first submission though, my first one sucked ass too so no harm done, we all have to learn somewhere.
It's not as bad as half the junk that comes through here so I passed it, but next time possibly work on your jokes a little and get a few extra voices, the monotonus pilot wasn't too funny. Make that an announcer's voice and that probably would've made me laugh.